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Post by VaNiShEd LoVe on Fri Nov 02, 2007 4:33 am

تأملات

زهورٌ متناثرة
تبتعد عن شاطئ
لوّث بعبير ذكرى
تغزو دائرة الخلود.

وادٍ أخضر
-يتلاشى-
تاركًا رائحة عشبٍ مبلل
أدمنته روحٌ مبعثرة
تلملم شظاياه.

ابتسامةٌ بلا رتوش.
تثابر للبقاء,
تخفي ضعف كائنٍ
كان يُطلَق عليه
إنسان.

ثورةٌ تصطنع الزهد,
تخدعها بالخمود,
تفاجئها باجتياح
المحطة الأخيرة.

صفحات تُطوى,
تأمره بالرحيل.



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Post by Amir A.Fattah on Fri Nov 02, 2007 5:08 am

السلام عليكم
نيهال...
جميلة جدًا حيث رأيت تطورًا في الأسلوب واختيار لاتجاه آخر...
لكن بدأت كلماتك بقوة ثم بدأت تضعف شيئًا فشيئا...
تحتاجين للقراءة كثيرًا.
أتمنى لك التوفيق
والسلام عليكم
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Post by sara el sweefy on Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:38 pm

3gabtny gedan gedan, we feha wak3ya we sedk.
bas yaret tkabr el 5at shwaya 3shan ana nazry 3la ady.
bas begad 7elwa
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Post by VaNiShEd LoVe on Fri Nov 02, 2007 11:05 pm

Amir ,
thnx 4 the editing and ur words......

Sara,
thnx 3ala el comment w kbart el 5at 3ashan 5atrek Wink
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Post by sara el sweefy on Sat Nov 03, 2007 1:48 pm

thx 3shan kabart el 5at
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Post by Sound of Silence on Tue Nov 06, 2007 4:33 pm

hey

I can see some mistakes
I'll help u edit it tongue

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Post by Amir A.Fattah on Wed Nov 07, 2007 3:46 am

Dear Nehal,
We will discuss it on thursday keep in touch...
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Post by VaNiShEd LoVe on Thu Nov 08, 2007 6:19 am

Amir,
thnx millions ,dear, 4 everything......Ur surprises 3an jad tetayer el3a2l Razz .....we yarab akon msa7sa7a w metzabata tom. (2day) to discuss it .
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Sleep

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Post by GalbaToriX on Thu Nov 08, 2007 8:15 pm

Vanished Love
I liked ur way of writing
ur a good writer
I'll try to be with u guyz at the discussion
Smile
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Post by VaNiShEd LoVe on Thu Nov 08, 2007 8:32 pm

Dear GalbaToriX:

Thnx 4 ur comment and it will be our honour to have u in the discussion .
Waiting for ya
bs momkn 23raf ur name ?

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Post by GalbaToriX on Fri Nov 09, 2007 2:33 am

Vanished Love,
I'm so sorry
couldnt catch the discussion
and my name is Ahmed
u can call me El Masry
and I would like to know ur name 2
best wishes Smile
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