My present for u befor I go

by sara el sweefy Sat Nov 03, 2007 2:54 pm

My present for you before i go

Days and days have gone
Nights and nights were fun
Just you and me and non
We were to each other like the sun

I was there for you
Sharing every thing you do
And you were there for me too
We were happy for few,
I did every thing i can do
To keep you near
And never let you go

But now we are done
Every thing fun is gone
We killed our sun
And nothing is left for non

I don't blame you
I don't blame no one
It's my destiny to go and never come

I could have stayed if u wanted
I could have done any thing if you made notes.
For you i changed my thoughts
To be with you that is all what i want
And this is my only fault

Now it is time to say good bye
To make apoint that i'll away fly
I'll never come back to try
The forgetfulness will be my sky
The rain will be my cry

I wrote this poem for you
To make adeep sense that i love you
This is my present for you before i go...

by sara el sweefy Sat Nov 03, 2007 2:58 pm

it is asong.
i made it for some one i love him so much.
i present it for him

by VaNiShEd LoVe Sat Nov 03, 2007 10:15 pm

Dear Sara,

u've a flow of emotions gaaaamed awi....

bs u need to work on ur lang. 7abibty .

I will send u an edited vesrion later bcoz i am busy right now.

3ala fekra ana asmy Nehal

by Amir A.Fattah Sun Nov 04, 2007 11:23 pm

Good work...
bgd ya Sarah isA
Ashofk ba3d keda
Katbt a3'ani English...
m3a Linkin Park w Avril Lavigne w Evanescence

by sara el sweefy Mon Nov 05, 2007 12:03 am

thank you ya Amir,
enta rafe3 m3nweaty keda dayman.
bas mesh awe keda ya 3am, linkin park we Avril we el nas el gamda de.
pas law zabat el nas de mesh hnsako
we hakteb 3anko bara2.
hahhahahhahahhahha
shokran ya Amer begad klamak befara7ny

by sara el sweefy Mon Nov 05, 2007 11:57 pm

Nehal,
thank u so much for ur effort to edit my song.
and i made edit for the mistakess which u sent it to me.
thanks so much.

by VaNiShEd LoVe Thu Nov 08, 2007 6:40 am

Sara,
Anytime dear bs feh 7agat ana 3mltelha editing msh 3mlteha hena...
Anywayz eager to read more of ur writings

by moi Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:07 pm

i see this song as a fergie or avril song
but i must tell you b4 fergie do that there are a few words you need to check them out b4 posting any topic even in arabic i mean and take care of ur grammer it's good here
and i think you r intersted in finding words to agree wz qafya more than what it's mean
after all you have a great piece here
w lais kol ma youktab momken an youta3'anna bhe bl ma kan sadq el e7sas, 3abson blmasha3r

by sara el sweefy Thu Nov 15, 2007 5:19 pm

moi, thx for ur lovley comment,

i am so happy that u like it,
and i ma agree with u about:(w lais kol ma youktab momken an youta3'anna bhe bl ma kan sadq el e7sas)

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